Paragraph Doctory

WALT: rework paragraphs to meet effective paragraph criteria Link to workshop. we hade to make a post that shows you how to doctor a paragraph. finished para I will tell you about slip. Slip is to slap on a hat in the sun here are some of the things to wear in the hot sun. You can put on a long sleeved shirt to protect your arms so that they don't get burned. Sun glasses is an ideal choice for this ecation and a good idea is to find some shade.a good idea is to wear Tops with Dark colours and a tighter weave will help protect you even more. sick paragraph:I will tell you about slip. Slip is to slip on the right clothes in the sun here are some of the things to wear in the hot sun. You can put on a long sleeved shirt to protect your arms and go find some shade.Tops with Dark colours and a tighter weave will help protect you even more.