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Tuesday 27 May 2014

I was there

Title: i was there Start writing here: On a pitch black night in the sub-zero atlantic ocean in the most luxurious liner titanic. Warm cozy in the first class cabin room no noise at all not even a swish from a wave suddenly we heard a crash on to the s hip. The titanic has crashed in the iceberg every one racing for a life boat the ice cold water is flooding the front compartments causing titanic to begin lifting the humongous stern of the ship up. The boiler stacks snapped off the ship it smelled of smoke people choking and dying. unexpectedly the titanic started to snap in the middle it is going to snap we are all terrified people jumping off the ship in the water. People drowning and dying of hypothermia i had one last choice either to jump into water for a life boat or go down with the ship. Keep your eyes on for part 2. wich is coming soon.

Monday 26 May 2014

titanic

Title: I was there Start writing here: On a pitch black night in the sub-zero ocean in the most luxurious liner titanic.Warm cozy in the first class sleeping room no noise at all not even a swish from a wave suddenly bang crash crcrcr.the titanic has crashed in the iceberg every one racing for a life boat the ice cold water is flooding the front compartments causing titanic to begin lifting the humongous stern of the ship up. The boiler stacks snapped off the ship it smelled of smoke people choking and dying. unexpectedly the titanic started to snap in the middle it is going to snap we are all terrified people jumping off the ship in the water dying of hypothermia one more boat I rushed to it Im alive the end

Thursday 22 May 2014

the weird house in the middle of no were

On A pitch black night 2 kids went trick or treating in the middle of no wear, for hours the two kids were looking for A house. Then they saw A light blaze A distance away so the two boys sprinted to the house. As they pressed the doorbell the door swung open and almost hit the the two boys they yelled out ‘’HAHAHAHAHAHAHA’’. They heard A man say ‘’get out of my house get out of my house’’. The two kids said where's my candy bro he replied ‘’come hear’’ the kids were following the sound. Then they heard something crack, It was filled with candy the kids went crazy then a man walked out of a bed room. He looked freaky when the 2 kids saw the man they ran away when he on the lights he looked like A nerd. The 2 kids went back and saw him they started laughing their head off they said ‘’we thought you were A criminal’’ the man said ‘’well i'm not i tried to open the door but it swung open and the thing that dropped was my candy bowl so i hid in my room and then you guys ran away’’ then the kids said ‘’but you yelling to us doesn't cut it’’ Then the man said ‘’OOOOOO i thought you guys were robbing my house’’. So the two little boys said ‘’well bye then’’ the man replied ‘’bye’’. The END...

Friday 9 May 2014

Immersion assembly

On A wonderful morning the children of pt england school had to arrive at the assembly. As we entered all of our school saw balloons as we sat down we saw A clown and it was Mr Burt. He jumped out with excitement and welcomed the children back to Pt England. As he was talking he throw mini rugby balls into the crowed. It was cool because everyone was fighting for it and caching it. Team 5 was one of Me and Michael’s favourite item. It was about music and how do you make music out of instruments made from rubbish. And another item that we enjoyed was Team 3’s They teached the school how things fly it was one of my favorite ones.

My holidays

On a really good day with a blue sky and some white clouds. My family and i got ready to go Rainbow's End for a celebration of my birthday on April 19. We got in my van and started zooming of to rainbows end. While we were in the van my brothers were singing loud. When we got there there were smiles. I was full of excitement to go on the new ride the Stratosphere. We got in Rainbows End and i went really fast to the new ride. When i got there it was a very long line. I was waiting for minutes and minutes. Then finally it was me and my brothers turn to go on. They had to check maysun and me to see if we were tall enough and we Were. When the instructor told us to go on we were nervous it look like it was gonna go so high. when we went up it was going in loops which was making me dizzy and sick. Next ride up was the Power surge. Only my mum and i wanted to go on it. Spinning around and around it was crazy. When we were finish i said “ PHEWW that was extreme.” Next Was the alien spaceship The Invader It went so high and fast up in to the sky. My brother was screaming for ages. When we were finished i was disappointed. But it was fine i loved it at rainbows end. Next time it would be cool. I give it a 10 out of 10.