Wednesday, 17 April 2013

The Eel That Lived In The Omaru River.

Once upon a time there was an eel named James he was a strong eel. He lived in the crystal clear water of Omaru River. It was a very clean river until people started throwing rubbish into it. Over time he noticed that the river was getting dirty. James started finding it hard to breath because the water was thick with pollution. He was so hungry but the only thing he had to eat was gross plants. He could not eat those plants anymore. He had a plan. “I’m going to swim to the sea to find some fresh plants. As he got closer to the sea he found that he did not like the saltwater of the sea. He had no energy left to swim back to his river. He started to feel very sick, he was dying. James tried hard to get back to his river before he died. Unfortunately James didn’t make it, sadly he died. He turned into a ghost. Even though he was a ghost he tried to make his home clean. But without help from other eels and people he could not do the job.

1 comment:

  1. I really enjoyed reading your narrative, Shaitarn! It was quite sad about what happened to James. Great writing!


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