our tui presentation

this is made by me and my friend it is our work of a tui

walt: add detail to beginning middle and end of sentence

i have learnt how to put in more detail in my sentences.we started with i walked to the shop.this is our writting hope you enjoy. 

My Map

This is my picture of what my map looks like for Glenn innes.

How to get to KFC.
To get to KFC you tern right out of pt England and go strait until you find the round about.Go north on your  third exit.

The pools.
1.to get to the pools tern right out of pt England
2. Go strait and tern on third exit           3. Go down pt England then tern left in to the  driveway.

my free blog writing 2

Once there were two kids named Josh and Franklin that didn't have parents they have been bullied. They have been chased by dogs and bullies. Josh and Franklin got sick of it. then they stood up for their self. The bullies came back from around the corner and they tried beating them up but Josh and Franklin said ‘’OK COME THEN’’the bullies ran up to Josh and josh kicked the bullie right in the in the leg. The the next bullie ran up to Franklin and Franklin jabed the bullie right in the face.

After the fight they went to find their Mum and Dad they felt so lonely because they were walking for days than they saw big bags with food and water they could only carry 2 bags of it then they walked to the gas station and said can I have A big bottle of water then the man said two dollars please then they gave it. as they left they saw to people Lying down they knew it was there mum and dad the they said hi mum and she said what is your name and he said Josh the she said we found our kids.

Then the left and live happily ever after.

my weather investigation

This is my three graphs about the wind speed. My best one is the top because it is easy to see and it is more detail.

I was finding out  the patter the wind picks up then drops down.

I found out that it is  true.

I conclude that the temperature drops at least once.