writing practice

in room 13 we are going to have a writing test and here is my writing.Once upon there was a boy named zane he was on the park but sudenly he felt unsafe do you know why?One day he was walking towards the park.As he was walking 3 bullys said hey dweb face give me your lunch money zane said no and ran away. At play time he went to the park but then the bullies came and tried to fight him he tried to talk them out of fighting but it failed. So all the kids gathered around in a circle and yield fight fight fight but he did not fight. The next morning he went to class. He did not tell the teacher because he knew that if had of told he would get bullied even more. At play time he got some of his freinds to come and watch the bulles so that when he goes to tell the teacher he has proof that they bulled him just case if they lie.So after play time he tolled the teacher and the bullies stoped.1 year later they were best freinds.